Saturday, May 6, 2023

A SLOUGH OF DESPAIR (Chapter 5 of a Novel by Louise Scott)

 

Chapter 5

During the day I left messages on Sally's answering machine.  All that cold, gray day at Melanie’s house the phone remained silent.  The upstairs windows looked out on a garden dead from the winter. There wasn't any sense in more packing until I knew when, indeed if, I would be leaving.  Perhaps I would need to be packing to rent a place in town.  There was nothing to do all day but wring my fingers and count on my worry beads about what was happening with Justin and to wait for the phone to ring.

Waiting is. . .

Melanie had radically decorated the upstairs guestroom with walls painted shocking pink, using bright pumpkin orange as accent on the silk pillows and curtains.  The bedside lamps had purple pleated shades that matched the purple frames on several ultra-dimensional Escher prints; the prints made me think of a Mobius strip--only a person versed in the unified field theory could understand Escher’s art: people seeming to go from level to level never succeeding.  The room was eccentrically decorated, but it worked.  Sliding glass doors led to a south-facing balcony. The other walls had large windows that gave a splendid view of the hills beyond that were speckled with dark green pine over a leftover dusting of snow. The sky was a crystalline blue though there was another storm approaching.  It was cold enough to freeze the balls off a brass monkey.

I spent the day lethargically lounging around Melanie's spacious upstairs guestroom.  Comfy and cozy, swaddled with a soft down comforter around my shoulders like I was in a cocoon.  On one shelf of the bookcase was a small framed photograph taken at a luncheon barbecue that Sally had given in her lovely garden one sunny afternoon years ago; way before all this current trouble with Justin, way before the Saudi Arabians destroyed the World Trade Center and gave George Bush and Cheney an excuse to invade Afghanistan.

Melanie, then late-forties, looked radiant with her shapely arms and ample bosom somewhat exposed.  The sunshine was bouncing off her glorious red hair.  She was cuddling Justin on her lap--at that time he was an angelic cherub of six months or so.  Preschooler Brandon, seen in profile in the background, was just stepping into one of those cheap round Doughboy wading pools that they sold at K-Mart. 

My three sumptuous daughters--Sally, Stacey and Marta--were standing behind my chair with their arms around one another. We were all smiling in the beauty of our youth—even I looked good.  I never have felt I was good-looking except when I see myself in a photo taken at some previous year. Then I was pretty--not beautiful--but I am glad I didn’t have to deal with buck teeth, cross eyes, a harelip, jug ears, or an oversized schnoz. 

Melanie is my long time best friend from forever and shares a lot of love with my family, especially fulfilling for her since she never had children of her own.  She has a genuine kindness that transcends the social distinctions of her Southern upper-class background; she’s a natural born democrat.

She was proud of her family, especially a great-grandfather who was said by some to have been a successful shipping entrepreneur and by others to have been a rapacious pirate or a slave trader.  She never knew which version was true, but money in her family had trickled down from him through the next generations, spendthrifts one and all, until now nothing was left in the coffers for Melanie.  She did all right for herself anyway, owning a trendy clothing store that catered to the stylistic consumerism of the designer-jeans crowd.  She had the Midas touch. Her opulent boutique, aptly named Daddy’s Money, mainly catered to trust-fund college students.  It had been Daddy’s money, her inheritance, that had set her up in the business and paid for her magnificent home.

 The day passed slowly.  I was feeling as out of synch as the Escher prints that showed dozens of  people going up and down lots of stairs to no avail.  Up stairs and down stairs, up and down, although there was no up or down to the various floors where the steps led.  I could identify with those people.  Like them, I was going nowhere, waiting for God knew what, with nothing to do that would matter.  Right then it seemed as if my life was on fast-forward and re-wind at the same time.

  By changing the present we couldn't bend the past, we couldn't change the history that had carried us inexorably to today with this plot unfolding in a way most definitely not to my liking.  Never mind how large a part of the mess I must have created-- undoubtedly so.  The past was the prologue.

 Where was Glenda the Good with her magic wand?  Where’s a Yellow Brick Road? I wished for a script change, one with a prancing white horse waiting for me to climb upon its back and charge against the evils occurring in the world—evils occurring right in my own back yard--actually in what would have been my back yard if I still had one. And actually, I would have preferred to have it be a tall handsome hero wearing a Stetson, like Vincente Fernandez, who could ride up on his stallion to sing me a song and save us all.

There have been so many problems with Sally during the years that I've learned to live in spite of the agony, immunized against the pain.  Sorrow no longer flowed; it was coagulated, but each time I thought of Justin--the poor little bugger, probably again locked up in that sterile hospital--my constraint would burst like a dam and flood me with tears.  Finally I had hiccups, the hiccups turned into deep breaths, and then I was only aware of a deathly vacancy as minutes ate into the day.

Not knowing how else to handle my anxiety, I did a dynamite job of cleaning Melanie's elegant house, moving and polishing heavy antique furniture and even cleaning behind the refrigerator.  Mercifully, the edge of my misery was rusted a little by the housework routine while I was listening to Melanie’s collection of Mozart. To stop the futile pondering I concocted an eggplant Parmesan using leftover spaghetti sauce.  No Parmesan cheese, so I substituted ricotta and a nub of dried up Swiss I found.  

***

I was sprawled on the white leather couch, keeping my feet well off of it, staring blankly out the window at the gathering of sullen black clouds beyond, watching the storm clouds’ indigo rim stretching out to suck down and swallow the red sun, when Melanie's Subaru roared its way up the drive. 

Her cheeks and snub nose were rosy from the cold, her flaming red hair was lightly sprinkled with snow as she came tromping in juggling loaded market bags and bundles. Melanie is small but dynamic; a Mighty Mouse, Brandon once said. 

"Great God, Polly,” she drawled as she entered. “I declare! You look a mess!  Your eyes are puffed out like a bullfrog's.  What's the matter, Girl?  Are you sick?"  Her voice was particularly Southern as it is when she feels any strong emotion or drinks too much booze.  She always says ‘aaahnt’ and ‘aaahfter’ like the good Southern Belle she was raised to be.  She has a slight lisp whereby she holds on to the constants and slides over the vowels.

 In one motion she dropped her purse and grocery bags on the floor as she tossed her fur-lined coat and bright yellow scarf on top of the big seaman’s chest.

“Big problem with my grandson,” I told her.

“A big problem?  It must be something with Justin.  It can’t be with Brandon.”

"No.  Never a problem with Brandon.  But there is a heavy-duty mess with Justin.   Sally says he threw a tantrum at school.  A regular conniption fit.  The cops came and handcuffed him and took him away.”

“What?  Police? Trouble at school?”

“That's all I know.  I'm waiting for Sally to call with more information about what occurred."

“What?  Goodness Gracious! Cops?  Handcuffs?

“Yes,” I said. “The police handcuffed him.”

“A little squirt like him?  Handcuffed? You gotta be kidding.  He's spunky okay, rambunctious for sure, but handcuffs!   That's unbelievable. That's dreadful, atrocious, too barbaric," Melanie declared, astonished.  “Cops, eh?  They took him?  Where did they take our boisterous little lad?  Handcuffed like a criminal, he was?  Gee Whilikers! They took him to the hoosegow, you say?”

“No, I don’t think they took him to jail, but I think he’s back to the Children’s Psychiatric Hospital in Denver.” 

"Eh?  To the Funny Farm?  Again?"

"Again.  Sally says there’s a lot going on that I don’t know about.  No surprise that."

She stood there quietly for a few minutes, and then gave my hand a sympathetic squeeze before she picked up the bags of groceries, went to the kitchen and returned with two strong gin and tonics.  Mine must have been at least a double.  She placed the glasses on the coffee table as I scrunched and pulled my knees up to make room for her at my side.  She collapsed like a deflated balloon, then kicked off her snow boots and sprawled arms akimbo with her legs splayed straight out.  Melanie seldom relaxes, but when she does, she goes all the way.  There are no holds barred with anything she does.

"Well I’ll be jiggered. I thought things were going well with Sally and the kids,” she said, “now that she’s no longer being a hot floozy exotic dancer; no longer Pussy Galore.  But I guess you don’t make over a life the way you sew on a loose button.”

"I also thought things were better until a month or so ago when I had the boys sleep over at my place.  She was supposed to pick them up early the next morning.  She didn't come for them as expected, nor did she answer the phone, so I was worried.  Late that afternoon when I took the boys home she was laying on the sofa in her bedroom, the room dark with the curtains drawn--most gloomy.  I could only rouse her enough that she looked at me with lackluster eyes and mumbled that she had a migraine.

“I don't know, Melanie.  At the time I accepted that it was a migraine and whatever she'd taken to knock herself out with was necessary for the pain, but I don't know.  Maybe it was a hangover or maybe she was on downers again.  Drugs.

“I didn't know what to do.  I don’t know what to do now. I never know what to do. The boys had headed straight to their room and were gleefully murdering each other by proxy on one of those violent video games. One of Mrs. Lujan’s nurses was there in the house, so I left."

Melanie’s brow was furrowed as she asked: "But except for that, you thought she was doing well?"

"Yes, I've thought things were much better, that she finally had both oars in the water. She said that on weekends she’s been taking the boys to a motel where there's a heated pool.  She said she and the kids swim, go to Mass, then to the movies before eating at McDonald's or having pizza.  It's a big improvement over keeping them quiet at Mrs. Lujan's."

"Golly! It must cost her a fortune to do that, eh?  Why doesn't she get a different job and rent her own place?”

"Of course,” I sniveled. “Obviously.  But it's her business, not mine.  I don’t deserve any gold star for motherhood; much of Sally’s problems can be laid right at my door.  Mea culpa.  Anyway--going away with the boys on weekends is a solution--of sorts.  Without paying any rent, she easily earns enough taking care of Mrs. Lujan’s affairs to pay for it since she's stopped spending money for booze and drugs."

"If she's stopped," Melanie said, unconvinced.

"I've believed so."

"Well, Girl, do you believe it now?”

“I don't know.   I just don't know."

There was nothing more to say.  We’ve been friends since Jesus wore diapers so we don’t need a lot of conversation.  During the Beatnik era we had cemented a friendship as we spent hours drinking coffee or wine while we discussed politics, styles, books by Sartre, Camus, the other existentialist writers.  We wore black turtleneck sweaters as we listened to Billie Holiday and Miles Davis, told our fortunes with Tarot cards and the I Ching.  One of the nicest parts about a good friend is that when you don't know what you're doing, there’s at least a chance someone else does.  It was cathartic to talk it over, but nothing was solved.

We sat in silence as the sun briefly flashed through a break between the approaching ominous low-lying heavy black snow clouds.  The very noise of our breathing seemed a violation of the silence.

***

  Melanie was peeling potatoes and I was chopping leeks when finally Sally phoned.

“Well, Mama, they took Justin to Children's Hospital in Denver again," she mumbled.  "I can't go to see him for a couple of days--hospital rules for new admittees.”

“Not even you, his mother?”

“Not even me.  But Mama, you and I need to talk.  You don't have any idea about how things are. No idea at all.  Would you come over for breakfast in the morning?  There's a lot I need to tell you.  There's a lot you need to know."

 "Of course.  I'll be there by eight with the whole day free and will help in any way I can.  Is there any chance you can get Justin released right away?"

My hopes were up, maybe there could be a rewind.  Maybe this time we could arrange for Justin to live with his Aunt Stacey. Maybe we could right away get the paperwork done for whatever releases the hospital might need, undo the inevitable red tape that’s always strangling everyone in corporate bureaucracy.

"We'll talk about that and a whole lot more in the morning, Mama.  There’s much you need to know, but right now I'm too tired and discouraged to go into it.  I’m collapsing with fatigue.”  Her voice sounded wasted—pooped--ready to drop.  She said she still had to pick up Mrs. Lujan's medications and do payroll for the nurses before she could go to bed.  “We'll talk tomorrow and I’ll explain it all,” she promised.  “You’ll understand then.  See you at eight.”

“Good night.  And Sally, you know things will get better.  All is not lost."

“Well, Mama, if all is not lost, I’d like to know where the hell is it.”


Written by Louise Pickering Scott

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